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London
London, the capital of Grain Britain, is the biggest city in the country. London is in south-east England on the river Thames and is an important port and a centre for business, industry and tourism. The city London’s financial centre, is only one square mile in size, but it is the heart of the nation’s commerce.
London is a cosmopolitan city-over a million of its groups from all over the world.
Many of them still live in separate communities in particular districts.
London dates back to Roman times and has many historic building such as Buckingham Palaces, Westminster abbey, the Tower of London and many others.
It also has famous museums and art galleries, beautiful parks, interesting places to shop, from small boutiques to large department stores, together with first-class theatres, cinemas, concert halls and discos.
Visitors can choose from may entertainments- a stroll round Hyde Park, a visit to the British Museum, a cruise down the Thames, a visit to a street market, a meal in a pub or in a ethnic.

The Tower of London
The Tower of London is next to the River Thames. It is almost one thousand years old. William the Conqueror , the King of England, built it in 1078 to protect the city.
Kings and queens of England lived in the Tower and used the place as a palace and a prison. The Tower is one of the most popular tourist attractions in London.
People come from all over the world to visit the Tower of London and to see the Crown Jewels.
Buckingham Palace
Buckingham Palace is the London residence of the London residence of the Royal Family. Queen Victoria, at the age of 19 and just three weeks after ascending the throne, made it her official home.
If the flag is flying on the roof it means that the sovereign is at the Palace.
On special occasions the Royal Family appears on the central balcony at the front to wave to people .
Behind the Palace there are 400 acres of private gardens, witch are a safe place to live in for wildlife in the city.
About 400 people work at Buckingham, including domestic servants, cook, gardeners, electricians and even two people who look after the three hundred clocks!
The Palace contains about 600 rooms.
These include the magnificent State Apartments, with the White, Green and Blue Drawing Rooms, a Music room, a Ballroom a State Dining Room and of course the Throne Room.
There is also a Picture Gallery. It houses a collection of valuable paintings, drawings and forniture.
The Gallery and some of the State Rooms are open to the public in August and September.
The best time to visit the Palace is between 11.00 a.m. and 11.30 a.m. for the Changing of the Guard, which takes place every day from April to July and on alternate days during the rest of the year.
To have a good position and enjoy this spectacular event completely it is necessary to get there early.

Trafalgar Square
Trafalgar Square is the main square in Central London. In the main Square were Square were in center.
There is a colimn whit the Statue of Nelson on the top.
It was bealt to commemorate the famous Victory of National Gallery, St Martin-in-the Fields and Nelson’s Column. This Square is very popular whit visitors, who relax by the fountains and feed the pigeons.

Piccadilly Circus
Piccadilly Circus is a well-know square, where a number of famous street meet, including Piccadilly, Regent Street and Shaftesbury Avenue. This square is famous for its brightly lit neon advertisements at night. In the centre of square there is the famous statue of Eros.

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