Anonimo
Anonimo ha chiesto in Società e cultureLingue · 9 anni fa

Mi serve aiuto in inglese per la tesina...possibilmente esperti non gente che traduce con google!?

Questo è l'argomento che ho preparato e scritto io per gli esami.

Mi serve qualcuno, magari madre lingua, o un prof di inglese, che mi dica se ci sono errori in modo da correggerli:

Eating disorders:

Eating habits are often influenced by social and cultural patterns.

The result is a series of disorders associated with food, like anorexia and bulimia.

Food disorders often affect young women who are “perfectionists” with high expectations of themselves but never satisfied.

Subjects who suffer from these disorders refuse to take food, as in the case of anorexia, or they eat and force themselves to vomit, as happens in case of bulimia.

Anorexia:

The anorexia mainly strikes young women, it is a persistent lack of appetite, usually caused by psychological causes.

The illness usually starts with dieting to lose excess weight, but then the dieting turns into a refusal to take food.

The illness can be caused by the desire of girls to imitate top models, and they associates food refusal with beauty.

In a small number of cases, anorexia brings to death.

Bulimia:

The bulimia is a psychological illness which generally affects older girls who are apparently sociable.

Bulimia is related to anorexia, characterized by gorging food then followed by forced vomiting, this situation creates states of anxiety and depression.

Grazie mille :)

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    Eating disorders:

    Eating habits are often influenced by social and cultural patterns.

    The result is a series of disorders associated with food, such as anorexia and bulimia.

    Eating disorders (non si dice food disorders) often affect young women who are “perfectionists” and have high expectations of themselves, but never feel satisfied.

    People who suffer from these disorders refuse to eat (take food non si dice), as in the case of anorexia, or they eat and force themselves to vomit, which is what happens with bulimia.

    Anorexia:

    Anorexia mainly occurs in young women. It is a persistent lack of appetite, usually caused by psychological causes.

    The illness usually starts with dieting to lose excess weight, but then the dieting turns into a refusal to eat any food.

    The illness can be caused by the desire of girls to imitate supermodels, therefore they associates food refusal with beauty.

    In a small number of cases, anorexia results in death.

    Bulimia:

    Bulimia is a psychological illness which generally affects older girls who are apparently sociable.

    Bulimia is related to anorexia, characterized by gorging food then followed by forced vomiting, this situation creates states of anxiety and depression.

    complimenti, hai scritto bene! :)

    Fonte/i: madrelingua inglese
  • non ti correggo niente perché non sono madre lingua.. però ho un consiglio per te.. se posti questa domanda su yahoo answer UK che trovi a fondo pagina insieme agli altri paesi del mondo e scrivi se è giusto o sbagliato dicendo che non sei inglese loro te lo correggono perfetto!

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