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Anonimo ha chiesto in Società e cultureLingue · 7 anni fa

Questa traduzione dall'inglese è esatta?

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sto scrivendo la tesina di terza media e volevo sapere se questa breve biografia inglese di Steve Jobs è esatta( come grammatica, s'intende).Grazie in anticipo.

Steven Jobs was born February 24, 1955, in San Francisco, California, and was adopted by Paul and Clara Jobs and grew up in Silicon Valley. He grew up with one sister, Patty.

As a child, Jobs preferred doing things by himself. He swam competitively, but was not interested in team sports or other group activities. At an early age his interests developed in electronics and gadgetry. He spent a lot of time working in the garage workshop of a neighbor.

In 1975 Jobs joined a group known as the Homebrew Computer Club. One member, a technical whiz named Steve Wozniak, was trying to build a small computer. Jobs became fascinated with the marketing potential of such a computer. He and Wozniak formed their own company. They called it Apple Computer Company. They raised $1,300 in startup money by selling Jobs’s microbus and Wozniak’s calculator.

Looking at the self created huge computer, Steve realized there was a huge gap in the computer market. Advances in electronics, meant that computer components were getting smaller and the power of the computer was increasing. Jobs and Wozniak redesigned their computer, with the idea of selling it to individual users. The Apple II went to market with impressive first year sales of $2.7 million. Jobs and Wozniak had opened an entirely new market—personal computers.

The Macintosh was a revolutionary new model. It took the graphical user interface software – the desktop and mouse-controlled cursor you see on your screen today. However, The Macintosh did not sell well to businesses and this failure of the Macintosh signaled the beginning of Jobs’s downfall at Apple.

Apple’s iPod portable music player and iTunes store is heralded as revolutionizing the way people listen to and buy music. Launched in 2001 Apple’s first iPod cost $499, paving the iPod Nano, iPod Touch and iPod Shuffle, which came later. iTunes was also launched in 2001, adding an online music store in 2003 – the first ever legal online music store. As of this year iTunes has sold over 16 billion songs.

in 2004 he was diagnosed with pancreatic cancer.

Apple released a declaration saying that Jobs had died as a result of a respiratory arrest due to a heart attack, Oct. 5, 2011, at 56 years old, remembering him as a brilliant innovator.

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    Steven Jobs was born on February 24, 1955, in San Francisco, California, was adopted by Paul and Clara Jobs and grew up in Silicon Valley. He grew up with one sister, Patty.

    As a child, Jobs preferred doing things by himself. He swam competitively, but was not interested in team sports or other group activities. At an early age his interests developed in electronics and gadgetry. He spent a lot of time working in the garage workshop of a neighbor.

    In 1975 Jobs joined a group known as the Homebrew Computer Club. One member, a technical whiz named Steve Wozniak, was trying to build a small computer. Jobs became fascinated with the marketing potential of such a computer. He and Wozniak formed their own company. They called it Apple Computer Company. They raised $1,300 in startup money by selling Jobs’s microbus and Wozniak’s calculator.

    Looking at the self-created huge computer, Steve realized there was a huge gap in the computer market. Advances in electronics meant that computer components were getting smaller and the power of the computer was increasing. Jobs and Wozniak redesigned their computer, with the idea of selling it to individual users. The Apple II went to market with impressive first year sales of $2.7 million. Jobs and Wozniak had opened an entirely new market—personal computers.

    The Macintosh was a revolutionary new model. It took the graphical user interface software – the desktop and mouse-controlled cursor you see on your screen today. However, The Macintosh did not sell well to businesses and this failure of the Macintosh signaled the beginning of Jobs’s downfall at Apple.

    Apple’s iPod portable music player and iTunes store is heralded as revolutionizing the way people listen to and buy music. Launched in 2001 Apple’s first iPod cost $499, paving the way to iPod Nano, iPod Touch and iPod Shuffle, which came later. iTunes was also launched in 2001, adding an online music store in 2003 – the first ever legal online music store. As from this year iTunes has sold over 16 billion songs.

    in 2004 Steve was diagnosed a pancreatic cancer.

    Apple released a declaration saying that Jobs had died as a result of a respiratory arrest due to a heart attack on Oct. 5, 2011, at 56 years old, remembering him as a brilliant innovator.

    Fonte/i: Bye
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  • Anonimo
    7 anni fa

    e esattissima

    Fonte/i: bravo,meriti un bel 10
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