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Salve, a breve farò un test per la facoltà di Mediazione Linguistica, che prevede anche delle traduzioni. Per esercitarmi, ho provato a tradurre - cercando di usare il meno possibile il dizionario- un testo preso da internet dall'italiano all'inglese. Vorrei che qualcuno che conosce bene entrambe le lingue gli dia un'occhiata per poi darmi dei consigli o fare correzioni... Grazie mille a chi vorrà aiutarmi :)

In passato, parlare una seconda lingua era indice di alto livello sociale ed economico; oggi, invece, la conoscenza dell’inglese si sta trasformando in un requisito essenziale per chi lavora, proprio come è stato negli ultimi due secoli l’alfabetismo.

La globalizzazione ne richiede infatti l’apprendimento, per comunicare sia nel business internazionale sia in ogni situazione in cui siano presenti persone che non parlano la stessa lingua.

L’inglese è anche ormai la lingua del turismo, la cui conoscenza consente di superare le barriere linguistiche ed ampliare la propria esperienza, rendendo possibile la comunicazione con la gente del posto e con gli altri turisti e aiutando ad affrontare molte situazioni, come la ricerca di alloggio e la richiesta di informazioni.

Per rimanere quindi al passo con i tempi non si può non impararlo ed il modo migliore per farlo è attraverso le vacanze studio inglese all’estero.Le vacanze studio, rivolte generalmente a ragazzi dai 10 ai 18 anni, rappresentano la soluzione vincente per i più giovani, poichè consentono di apprendere la lingua e, allo stesso tempo, di divertirsi in tutta sicurezza. Parte essenziale del soggiorno è infatti l’organizzazione del tempo libero sempre ricco di iniziative, da vivere in allegria con nuovi amici provenienti da tutto il mondo.

Tra le destinazioni più amate, vi è la vacanza studio Londra; nella capitale britannica i più giovani iniziano a studiare l’inglese, che per loro sarà essenziale nello studio e nel lavoro, ed, allo stesso tempo, hanno la possibibilità di vivere l’emozione di essere per la prima volta lontani da casa in un altro paese.

Questa è la mia traduzione :

In the past, speaking a second language meant to be socially and economically advantaged. Nowadays the knowledge of Englis is turning into an essential requirement for workers instead, exactly like literacy was last 2 centuries. Indeed, the globalization requires its learning to communicate both in the international business and every situation in which there are people who don't speak the same language. English is also now the language of tourism. Its knowledge allows people to overcome the linguistic bariers and enlarge their experience, making the communication between local people and tourists possible and helping to face many situations, like the research of an accommodation or the request of information. Therefore people can't ignore English if they want to be in step with the time and the best way to learn it is an English study holiday abroad. The study holiday,generally for teenagers from 10 to 18 years old, represents the right solution for the youngest as it allows them to learn the languiage and to have fun in total safety.

Crucial part of the journey is the organization of the spare time that is always full of initiatives, something to live happily with new friends from all over the world. Among the most popular destinations, there is the study holiday in London; in the British capital teenagers start to study English that will be essential for studies adn work. At the meantime, they have the opportunity of living the emotion to be far way from home in another country for the first time.

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Ho postato una domanda proprio perchè sono in difficoltà... gradirei sapere quali cose ho sbagliato invece di ricevere solo giudizi, tra l'altro molto poco carini....

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  • 7 anni fa
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    E' abbastanza buona la tua traduzione. Ti correggo solo gli errori e cambio alcune frasi che suonerebbero meglio in inglese (a sinistra la tua traduzione, a destra la mia):

    meant to be socially and economically advantaged -- was an indication (or indicator) of a high social and economical level

    Nowadays the knowledge of Englis is turning into an essential requirement for workers instead -- Nowadays, instead, the knowledge of Englis is turning into an essential requirement for workers

    exactly like literacy was last 2 centuries -- like literacy did in the last couple of centuries (exactly suona male)

    Indeed, the globalization requires its learning -- Learning a second language is indeed required by the globalization

    and every situation in which -- and in every situation where

    English is also now the language of tourism -- English is now the language of tourism too.

    to overcome the linguistic bariers -- to overcome linguistic bariers

    enlarge their experience -- increase their experience

    Therefore people can't ignore English if they want to be in step with the time -- To keep up with the times, therefore, you can not avoid to learn it

    an English study holiday -- an English language holiday

    of the spare time that is always full of initiatives -- of free time, always full of initiatives

    to live happily with new friends from all over the worl -- to enjoy with...

    Among the most popular destinations, there is the study holiday in London -- London is one of the most popular destinations for language holiday

    in the British capital teenagers start to study English that will be essential for studies adn work. At the meantime, they have the opportunity of living the emotion to be far way from home in another country for the first time - In the English capital, while they study English, which will be essential in their studying and at work, teenagers also experience living in another country for the first time

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  • Anonimo
    7 anni fa

    In the past, speaking a second language meant to BELONG TO UPPER CLASS (or: TO BE A WEALTHY PERSON // oR: BELONG TO THE PRIVILEGED// OR: BELONG TO THE UPPER CRUST). Nowadays the knowledge of ENGLISH is BECOMING an essential requirement for workers instead, exactly like THE PHEMENON OF ILLITERACY IN THE 19TH CENTURY. The globalization requires IN EFFECT learning to communicate both in the international business and IN every situation in which there are people who don't speak the same language. NOWADAYS English is also the language of tourism. Its knowledge allows people to GO BEYOND the linguistic HINDRANCES AND TO EXPAND their experience, making the communication between NATIVE people and tourists possible and helping to face many situations, like the research of an accommodation or the request FOR PIECES OF information. IN ORDER TO BE IN STEP WITH THE TIMES, people can't ignore EnglisH and the best way to learn it's an English study holiday abroad. The study holiday,generally for teenagers from 10 to 18 years old, represents the right solution for the youngest as it allows them to learn the langu(i)age and to have fun in total safety

    Crucial part of the journey is the organization of the spare time that is always full of initiatives, something to live happily with new friends from all over the world. Among the most FAVORITE destinations, there is the study holiday in London; in the British capital teenagers BEGIN to study English that will be essential for studies AND work. IN the meantime, they HAVE THE CHANCE OF living the emotion OF BEING far Away from home in another country for the first time.

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